Once again I spoke to several people in how I could improve my second draft front and back cover this time I will use specific criticism of the individual products to improve both the front and back greater than before.
Text
The text I used also got much praise once more as they did before; I made the text more enhanced to get a greater professional feel.
However, to improve:
- I need to keep the texts on both the back and the front the same; this was an error in which I was unaware
- On the back of the cover the text is hard to see due to overlapping of the image, I will have to rearrange either the picture or the text to suit the cover.
- Experiment with position and colour of text.
- include the album name
People said that the definition of the text was greatly improved and give the album a more professional feel.
Quality
The overall quality of the image and text greatly improved and made the covers seem greatly improved due to the quality of the images used, to improve:
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Include a barcode to keep the professional feel in
which I have tried to put across
Image
Once more the Pathetic Fallacy theme of which I wish to achieve has been praised. People felt this improved image worked well in the centre and the quality was greatly improved which held the professional feel in which I have tried to grasp with all my products. I changed and improved the images and listened to the feedback about the night and day comment and worked on this idea.
I feel that the transition from the 1st draft to the second draft was a great improvement and I feel proud of the changes that have happened. However I still feel there is improvement to be made to get the high quality/ pathetic fallacy theme in which I have wished to impose from the start.
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