Personal analysis of 30 second clip

The first obvious fault is the audio still on the track; it was an error and will be removed.

I think the video clip works well with the timing of the introduction alongside the music, however the barbwire shot did seem to quick and I will remove this, or extend the time in which the shot is on for to match the pace of the song.

The shot of the hot air balloon works well but I also feel there is no need for the shot to reoccur as it makes the video seem more amateurish. Therefore I will also replace one of the hot air balloon shots.

first 30 seconds of footage

snippit from Emily Rhodes on Vimeo.

Text on album cover Poll

 

I asked 20 people from around the school which they believed would work best with my album cover.

The Text 'Brain Flower' stood out as the most relevant text to my genre.

Along side asking, i showed them a clip from my video as well as the sound track to give them a greater knowledge of genre.

CD cover text shortlist

Below shows a shortlist of texts of what i propose to use on my CD cover, i will then go on to take a short poll to find which people believe works best with my CD cover.