The first obvious fault is the audio still on the track; it
was an error and will be removed.
I think the video clip works well with the timing of the
introduction alongside the music, however the barbwire shot did seem to quick
and I will remove this, or extend the time in which the shot is on for to match
the pace of the song.
The shot of the hot air balloon works well but I also feel
there is no need for the shot to reoccur as it makes the video seem more amateurish.
Therefore I will also replace one of the hot air balloon shots.
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